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In The Desert Land
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In The Desert Land |
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featherpen Junior Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 12 |
At the horizon, An illusion of an oasis, Gives me hope to take a few steps more, But the shrapnel, They have a plan of their own, And you never know what they have in store. In the desert land, Deserted, I stand, Alone, Fighting this unwanted war… At the horizon, I see some friendly Bedouins, Gives me hope to take a few steps anyways, But the war zone, Has a plan of its own, Like those mines that take my legs away. In the desert land, Deserted, I stand, Alone, Fighting this unwanted war… My stupid conscience, My damn ethics and discipline, None stand a chance, In this non ceremonial burial ground, The sandstorm pours over, Keeping me six feet under. |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
wow. this poem painted a picture in my head. excellant job keep it up ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
great imagery |
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featherpen Junior Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 12 |
Thanks folks. Much appreciated. |
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