Dark Poetry #4 |
Among Stars |
vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
So lonely, cold sitting up here in my spectators seat. Among the stars that died. Many years before. Only now shedding light, illuminating hope. falling blindly. cheaply handing out free wishes. Must've been an artist in some former life. So lonely up here in my seat among the stars. the same one reflected in those two lovers' eyes. The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
don't be silly! this is wonderful everything you have said to me tonight was so well explained in these two stanzas you have it in you u always did can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
"Only now shedding light, illuminating hope. falling blindly. cheaply handing out free wishes. Mst've been an artist in some former life." One question... where in the world do you find inspiration? I loved this.. it was so.. breath taking.. this is also going in my library.. ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Ah, good old Kirsty huh? Excellent. The point in the poem that Heather above me pointed out is truly one of the most awesome pieces I've ever read from you. Excellent. Courts. Hollow. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
all i can say, is that i adore this poem. it's so beautiful. |
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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
"Only now shedding light, illuminating hope. falling blindly. cheaply handing out free wishes. Mst've been an artist in some former life." Wow really i agree...this is soo deep and just wow...its great to know that your words turn into inspiration for others out there... |
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featherpen Junior Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 12 |
Very nice. I have to say your imagination is quite enviable. Lovely poem and thanks for sharing. |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
WOW! What a great poem! |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
awesome!!! keep it up ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
liked it.....nice job! |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Truly fantastic, Vampiana. This has to be one of the most solemnly heart-grabbing pieces I've encountered in a long time. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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Tears in the rain New Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 8 |
This is captivating. I wish it were longer so I could keep reading! |
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