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Dark Poetry #4

senses and wings.

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

0 posted 2006-04-23 04:52 PM

I cannot summon the strength to wander away,
My head hanging abject, defences on,
To only turn around and return,
Desperate and raw,
To repeat to you everything and more!, once more...
But I do it! I falter -
But persist.
I'm struggling for each and every one of you,
and just losing more self-esteem each time you reject me...
Do I even have anything left to give?
All I seem to hold,
Is a faded hope. Dusty,
and bruised....
The one without senses or wings.
No fervour, and no flight.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2006-04-23 06:43 PM

All I seem to hold,
Is a faded hope. Dusty,
and bruised....
The one without senses or wings.
No fervour, and no flight.

You write such despair so well... Welcome to Passions!

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

2 posted 2006-04-23 07:45 PM

Very sad
Hope to read more

*leah

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

3 posted 2006-04-24 11:22 PM

"I cannot summon the strength to wander away,
My head hanging abject, defences on,
To only turn around and return,
Desperate and raw, "

Wow... loved the opening. Desperate and raw was such a cutting image of the pain felt... awesome write, looking forward to your next post

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

4 posted 2006-04-25 02:51 PM

thank you all for the kind words...
it means a lot.

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