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Dark Poetry #4

Aspirations That Surround

BlueRhapsody
New Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 4
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2006-03-08 03:13 AM

I stand here, where the dead are alive
My intrusion isn't a bother, but a favor
The soil drank their blood swiftly
Despite the tombstones and withered roses
I stand my ground to these aspiration that surround

Ghosts drive fear into the empty hearted
We don't understand them
They try to grasp our warmth
While they endure cold and hunger
My eyes won't shut
Because I'm here to witness old friends
This other world...the other world...

~
This is one of my recent poems ^^! Hope you guys like it.

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

1 posted 2006-03-08 05:33 PM

Enjoyed this very much.../hats off to you!
Until...alibaster {the Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

Herumtreiber
New Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 8
California, USA

2 posted 2006-03-09 02:43 AM

It sounds like this has come from a personal expierience, it has a ring and a feel that nothing else can match.

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