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A daughters Rage |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA 
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Can you look at yourself? And when you do, if you can, are you disgusted? Do you see what I see? Denial, addiction and selfishness Can you see yourself for what you are? A liar, a con A man that has made no progress Can you see what you have done? Can you feel? …..anything? I hate you for the fool you’ve made out of me I loath you for your lack of discipline I cringe at the thought of you I laugh because it amuses me that you think you are free For years I wondered what you were all about Curious if while looking into your eyes I would see myself Now I am riddled with this hate. Now I pray every night I am nothing like you. Is this what they call fate? Now my curiosity is dead. Now my love for you is null I m so happy mom took me and fled. Your fabricated intoxicated world of miscalculated good intentions and repeated offenses against everyone and everything you come into contact with has bled into what is my world You seeped through the walls my mother built and made me care. You had no right! You had no idea. Now…you have no me. Your probably don’t even realize the damage you continue to cause. You probably have grown accustom to hurting people. But I ask you, Does it feel different this time? To hurt me…..your blood… The only child left speaking to you. Tel me, all of this because???? You claim when you look at me, when you hear me speak, when you hear about my past…you claim you can see yourself in me. If that is the case……. God help me, I’d rather die at my own hand than to repeat your predestined, self destructive, pitiful example of a human life. Your voice was so cold Your tone was so smug I thought you might laugh at any moment How dare you break your promises How dare you contintue hurting me How dare you come back? I'm done with you done with your excuses done with your reasons done with your pain I hope it hurts when you leave this world. I hope you find eternity unbearable. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. [This message has been edited by ranidae_poet (11-07-2003 12:29 PM).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is so bitter and so sad... i hope peace finds you and soon! i carry your heart with me |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
hey Greeneyes thanks...it has this is a situation of the past...well, I say it has...I am 27 years old and yes I am bitter still but I am dealing with it. I appreciate your commeting. thank you. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch...like the ending lines |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
Hi again Shadow...yes...I m glad you felt what I was intending. thanks for commmenting and I m happy that you enjoyed it. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Why do we hurt the ones that love us? and love the ones that hurt us?? I guess I'll never know nor understand.. Very well expressed in this poem...bitter but real none the less... Click |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I hope it hurts when you leave this world. I hope you find eternity unbearable. This poem is pain...and is very painful to read. |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
click1: thank you for your comment...it does seem this way huh? mad: its suppose to...be painful to read.....it was agonizing to see it spell out on the page...as well.thank you for reading. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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