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The Being
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Jack Straw Member
since 2006-03-02
Posts 70 |
The being lives upstairs In celestial harmony Its described as omnipotent and all-knowing It has been dormant for thousands of years leaving its children to be While It's establishments live in entropy and confusion It also claims to be stronger than it's rival Although it's rival seems to have control of the creation So ask yourself is the being omnipotent at all? Is the being even real? This was the first poem I wrote, I was 15 when I wrote it.. I still have a conflicted view on religion, I'm not so atheistic anymore however. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I've asked the same questions... and have no answers. Good writing, especially for a then 15 yr old! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Great vocabulary for a 15 y/o. It has a solid and stong motion that carries throughout the end. Hits hard, u know what I mean? That has some creativity. |
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