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Dark Poetry #4

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rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

0 posted 2006-02-19 07:25 AM

Keys to a piano....

Being played for a fool

With every note, feeling shivers down my spine

Being pushed to the edge.

With each note reaching a higher climax

Soothed by classical music

Addicted to opera

An addiction for.......pain

deadkiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 31
washington

1 posted 2006-02-25 01:37 AM

i like the metaphore, and the end. it seems to take you from playing music to perhaps cutting yourself.

kitvb1
Junior Member

since 2006-01-23

Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

2 posted 2006-03-02 02:37 PM

This is great. Thanx... Kit

We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2006-03-04 04:22 PM

Yeah, music is definitely a way of life, in all respects.

God bless,
In Christ,
-Craig

Jesus

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

4 posted 2006-03-05 09:17 PM

what a piece, im like, in awe. this was very good. the wording and structer is very good. im very impressed by how good this was, even though it didnt rhyme ( not that it has to ). you did a really good job. i look foward to reading more by you. good luck

~Case~

Darkness fallows the currupted Martyr...

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