Dark Poetry #4 |
Motzart |
rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Keys to a piano.... Being played for a fool With every note, feeling shivers down my spine Being pushed to the edge. With each note reaching a higher climax Soothed by classical music Addicted to opera An addiction for.......pain |
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deadkiss Junior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 31washington |
i like the metaphore, and the end. it seems to take you from playing music to perhaps cutting yourself. |
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kitvb1 Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28Trebgast, Germany |
This is great. Thanx... Kit We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, music is definitely a way of life, in all respects. God bless, In Christ, -Craig Jesus |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
what a piece, im like, in awe. this was very good. the wording and structer is very good. im very impressed by how good this was, even though it didnt rhyme ( not that it has to ). you did a really good job. i look foward to reading more by you. good luck ~Case~ Darkness fallows the currupted Martyr... |
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