Dark Poetry #4 |
Lost In Time |
Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
Lost in Time By: Cherishable_Me Did you every wonder Or get a funny feeling that you’re lost? A place in time that you know your suppose to be But for some odd reason You’re in a different time and place Did you every question Why your fascinations come true in your dreams Wanting you to never wake up Because you don’t want leave A place where you can be yourself And shatter that vulgar image you once created. When you finally think you have That perfect moment that occurs once in your lifetime Just like that little taste of heaven Something unexpected happens You wake up and realize that it was a only dream Crying and wishing that it was reality But it was only a fantasy A dream waiting to come true |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
We have all been there its a horrible feeling, but we in time over come it. nice write I'll try to read more of your poems. ~Hali~ |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
So many times Ive been in dream land and dint want to wake up. Unknown or unexplained feelings tend to be signs that you may be in the spotlight soon. At least thats something Ive learned over time. It's like anticipation with visual assistance. Great little poem to read. ...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice. |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
many of us have felt this way..some more so then others. Good One! |
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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
Thanks a lot i feel like this many times...sometimes i wonder why the 21st century why not the 16th century but God has a plan for everyone right. |
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cinnabar Junior Member
since 2006-03-10
Posts 33Lot et Garonne, France. |
Lovely poem. Only when our time and place are out of joint can we write this stuff. Happy, or poet? Tough choice. Hope you're right about God. Wish he'd hurry up. Keep writing. You're good. Cinnabar. |
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Astrogirl18 Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16Canada |
~I totally agree~ |
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