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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
She sits inside, too afraid to go out With the world looking in with so much doubt. The glass is her only window to the world Too afraid to go out, she sits tight curled. The world has been cruel and she knows much pain And going outside would cause no gain. So safely inside, she turns way From the bright of dawn and beautiful day. A prisoner she is, of her own soul To remain inside, her only goal. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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kitvb1 Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28Trebgast, Germany |
I like this, we have an experience in common  You are not alone.We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths. |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
i feel this charatcer has a small amount of experince. in that if she stayed outside for a time, the pain would fade, indeed yes it will return i can guarentee this. however, the pleausres that arise outweight overwhelming(at least in my experince) i wonder, will she ever go outside? |
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stratagem888 New Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 4 |
I can relate to these feelings of isolation brought on by one's self. I like the title and the general imagery of the poem. |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Vey well written,sorry if it is motivated by personal pain! |
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