Dark Poetry #4 |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
a demon from hell come to hunt you down to rip out your soul to turn your smile to a frown he brings death death with his very breath it steals your hope and brings only despair when this abomination comes beware this demon is relentless he leaves none alive you'd better hurry go run and hide for he is coming inside one word is all it takes to take your life wholly and completely he shouts the word D-I-I-I-I-I-I-E-E-E-E -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
kinda dark and cryptic, but very cool in it's own depicted images kind of way. Cool post Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
i enjoy the structure and the flow of this work however i feel there could be more detail. it does give me the oh shit where is death feeling though i would like to see more detail. |
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