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Frozen Laughter New Member
since 2005-12-24
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This is my third poem I have ever written. I wrote two poems three years ago. But, this is my latest one. Feel free to comment however you like. This poem is very true and is how I really feel. "Hidden Emotions" You may know me as Dan I am known as the funny man When I start to feel sad again I try to do what I can To make you my fan Can you not understand? Why my life is so bland? All I'm known for is comedy You don't even take me seriously I can not even speak freely Without you mocking me I dont even know who to be Can you not see? What you have done to me? This is how I feel everyday Sorry I have to express myself this way Almost every night I pray That God wont let me go astray I can feel the sky turning grey Will tomorrow be a new day? Will I feel okay? I pray the sky will be blue So that I can express my love for you Hopefully you can love me too Please understand what I have been through The jokes are no longer new Can you see my point of view? Do you even have a clue? I want to just quit I am so sick of it Deep in my body my prayers sit Please God make me how you see fit I will try my best not to forfeit In time will you forget? Did you deal the final hit? |
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Frozen Laughter New Member
since 2005-12-24
Posts 3 |
no replies? |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
this is strange for me....i know someone named Dan who very well may be feeling this way right now. please know that it does get better....i have also been here. the people here are all very supportive and we welcome you. don't quit for you would only be letting yourself down. if this is how you feel and you need a friend feel free to email me and maybe we can chat. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Frozen Laughter New Member
since 2005-12-24
Posts 3 |
thanks. i just have my moments. what did you think about the poem though? |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
i liked it very much....and it invoked a feeling of something lost, but i know i have moved on. you said things that i could relate to and so therefore has meaning for me. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
I enjoyed your poem,a good write....paul shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness |
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