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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-11-04 12:05 PM

Stretch out your arm
and with your hand.
Grab the biggest piece
you can:

- And darkness will follow you
like the breeze in the tree’s.
A feeling
you’ll see
for the time – they’ll heed.
For when you wake - up
with their mornings do.
This window you know -
the should,
the good,
the blues
you choose.
Like that dream you lost.
This moment – now – and,
Tomorrow’s cost.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

ljossberir
Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 81
Ny, USA

1 posted 2003-11-04 04:05 PM

Very cool work! I love the way it flows, excellent, rapid rythm... enjoyed

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-11-04 07:11 PM

ah poe, i have lost many a dream and it sucks, but i do believe you are right, it is tomorrows cost, nice write!

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

3 posted 2003-11-04 11:39 PM

Tomorrow's coast holds so much for us.. Nice work liked the way the words just come together...

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-11-05 11:15 AM

* ljossberir, Thanks for stopping by. Enjoyed your comment - much appreciated. Thanks again.

poe

* eor, my man, still waiting. Time to let those juices flow again. Thanks again, later.

poe

* CrEaTuRe, I should get 3 credits for typing your name. Just kidding. I look at it real quick, and I see "creative creature". I like it. Thanks for stopping by. Appreciate it.

poe ---- Thanks ALL!!

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-11-07 07:38 PM

its comming soon poe, i promise...soon

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-08 12:56 PM

I can relate so well

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