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click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
0 posted 2005-11-05 11:17 PM

Life is good,
I feel its power,
pull me back,
to
consciousness.

The weight of living,
pulses,
as the
lavender light fades,
to night.

I dream,
whilest awake,
never knowing,
the fate
of my other self.

The one who wanders the path,
of the lethe of dreams.


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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2005-11-06 07:13 AM

Having just returned to the site after about two years of being away i'm very impressed by what i've been reading and this poem of yours is by far one of the best so far. Good Job and I hope to see more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-
click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
2 posted 2005-11-06 04:57 PM

welcome back bro..long time no see...

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