Dark Poetry #4 |
Brood Mood |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Oli chimoli!!!! Get those grandie girls! Quick! xoxo b |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...You are always so light and gay...I think you're entitled to one bad day! |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
This is amazing! I loved it...very dark...visceral...I truly enjoyed it! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is not the Marge I know and love!! Wish I had a bucket of sunshine and smiles to send you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know just how to fix that mood Marge. Spend an afternoon with the grandie girls carving pumpkins. That should lighten the mood in a hurry. But, I have to say, we are all entitled to one of these days once in awhile. Sending heart hugs your way, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I know what you need Marge! Dip into the Hallowe'en chocolate treats!! Works for me. hugs, Chris |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so different for you. I like it |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
As long as that's not an "eternal mark"... Sorry, that is a very bad inside pun to what was a very well written piece of literary art. I loved it. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
now i understand how someone can get 35,980 posts... because poems like this are a testimony to talent. you rock, marge!! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Here are some stars to start shifting your brood mood! ~ which, btw, you expressed very well! Love & Star Light, EO |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Miss Margie...I never thought I'd find your name in here... Hope the mood didn't last too long! hugs, g "A tiger who does not prowl becomes a rug..." ;) |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
so unlike you, but know that the mood has lifted. well done and every one is entitled to a brood mood occassionally. but please sweet marge i have enough for both of us okay. get them grandie girls and play with them for me okay. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FriendsAll~ Sometimes it just does us good to write 'outside the box' of our poetic familiarity ... I do ... and sometimes the poem just might REALLY be ME~ Thank you ALL for the replies~ I may find some dark ink again in the future to share with you all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
As the stars start to shift Make Margie's mood bright Let her heart shine with guideing light Shift her mood from black as night Give her the brightness of the sunlight ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetTracieGirl~ It lifts my heart just seeing you here How very wonderful the start of this New Year !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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