Dark Poetry #4 |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
I came home tonight you slammed the front door I cowared away from you you just raised your voice I cowared more then you raised your hand it hits me once I hit the wall and then the floor is that all I'm ever meant to be? You hit harder I begin to fight back the more I fight the harder you hit you hit me for what seems like hours til' I lie motionless on the floor you walk out I lay still and cry tonight's the night that I almost died. "See my wrists; |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andi~ You've penned a poetic scene that happens far too often in our society~ 'I lay still and cry tonight's the night that I almost died.' And in too many cases the 'almost' turns into sure death~ If you know anyone who goes through this, encourage them to get the help that may very well save their life~ True story - I had just such a friend, and believe me we all tried to get her to leave the man of her choosing ... she didn't and it cost her the loss of her life~ Thank you for this penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
Thanks for reading. Far too often these types of things go on with out anyone to say something about it. It's just time someone finally said something. |
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