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cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668
0 posted 2003-11-02 06:25 AM


Dream Angel

I hear you softly
call my name
as you enter my dream.

Together we journey
back to the time
when our love was new,

tasting the magic
of the days that would
last forever..

I awake in tears.
I know I must
Leave you Amongst the angels
© Copyright 2003 cusick - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-11-02 11:59 AM

Good God Maggie . . .
love in its purest form
xxoo
cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668
2 posted 2003-11-02 01:19 PM

Thanks for reading littlewing.Maggie
coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077
3 posted 2003-11-04 08:12 PM

The reader feels the full emotion in this one, Maggie.

Pure love, true and un-poisoned.

CB 8)
CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
4 posted 2003-11-04 11:49 PM

Seem so sacred and pure look of love that leave a knnowing smile on my face ... Really like it a lot..


Jazvina

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668
5 posted 2003-11-05 09:16 AM

Thank you Coyote. Glad you enjoyed it. Maggie
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668
6 posted 2003-11-05 09:17 AM

Thank you so much CrEaTuRe. Maggie
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883
7 posted 2003-11-05 10:50 AM

Cusick, Very nice, you brought the reader with you. Nice, Nice, job.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.
cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668
8 posted 2003-11-05 01:48 PM

Glad you liked it Mistipoe. Maggie
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
9 posted 2003-11-08 12:53 PM

sad...so sad
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