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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Slime Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ Black thoughts ooze covering me in their slime There is no wakening reason for the dark of my rhyme~ Stooping low, I kneel to feel the bottomless well I grope the ebon darkness in which I daily dwell~ Finding only the slime-of-time covering me …covering me oozing me ever darker, deeper than I’ve been in this dwell of Hell again and again and again~ ~I thought it only fair that as long as I was moderating the Dark Forum ... that I should contribute to it~ *I found my black ink* ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....dark sounds strange coming from your pen. I'll bet you can do anything you set your mind to, now can't you?  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, you captured an awful feel, that's for sure. Don't stay in that thought very long....lol. ....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge, you are so creative I do believe you could write about anything!  This would be great for Halloween! Very dark...and very good! Hugs~Nancy |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow....this is sooo different from you!!!! They are right indeed....Dear Marge you could write about anything!!!! You have many colors Marge as do us all!!!! HUGS, Bridgette |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I'll bet they have you moderating 'Dark' because you have such a sunny nature. Please lift your quill From that black ink well Your story of slime To us, you can't sell You are smiles and huglets, Everyone can tell. Rae |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is cute but quite different for you. Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is more than dark enough for me!!! When I first saw this, I thought "Marge wrote this?" I was relieved to read the explanation! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
black ink is interesting for you, Marge. I know this poem and this ink.  "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
The kindness of you all reaches deep into the heart of this poetess~  There are times in our lives when we all find ourselves floundering in the black ink of things ... I just don't care to dwell there for too long~ And ... RAE~ That is gorgeous ... thank you~ All happy thoughts sent your way dear ones~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
a delight to read, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's good to spill some black ink now and again Marge ... I like your internal rhymes and flow in this. Eery and dark, nicely done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Very black ink indeed...well put... Click |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for the replies to the dark of my ink~ I try not to dwell here often ... but at the same time, find the need once in awhile~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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