He Contemplates Her Wearing of His Anger

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2005-09-26 10:26 PM

its all in there
encased in a purple blue skin
all the pain betrayed by windows
she can't put shutters on.
the reflections replay ghosts of actions
raging fists
angry voice
the hard grinding hatred
taken out on one human heart
how can she...
be held responsible for all of his misfortune?
its all there
in his soul
the foul tool of manipulation
that he thinks might crush her will
the sad sick power he weilds
to keep her guilded in guilt.
its his only way of ensuring
that he won't be lonely
because he knows
its all there
encased in a purple blue skin
all the pain he's caused
waiting behind her eyes every day.
It reminds him
that love isn't the power he has over her
and that her eyes
are the loudest things
he cannot silence.

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

1 posted 2005-09-26 10:42 PM

"It reminds him
that love isn't the power he has over her
and that her eyes
are the loudest things
he cannot silence."

Speechless...

Until...ali {the Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2005-09-26 10:45 PM

It's old home week here... This is surely a piece you've penned from within - Well done, fair lady...

Now where the heck have you been - anyway???

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-09-26 10:47 PM

So good to read you again Jenn!
Excellent write!

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-09-26 10:55 PM

Wow, Jenn! This had quite a punch! Good to see you!!

gelato
Member

since 2005-10-27

Posts 63
TN,USA

5 posted 2005-11-05 02:40 PM

This seemed like a poem really brought out from the subconcious and therefore very powerful. And....WOW!!

"Buckle Up! It makes it harder for the aliens to suck you out of your car"

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

6 posted 2005-11-05 10:07 PM

brilliant

encased in a purple blue skin
all the pain he's caused
waiting behind her eyes every day.

amazing

very powerful indeed!

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

7 posted 2005-12-01 10:30 AM

Wow...this is my first venture into this forum and i must say when i read this i could recall every nasty, hurtful, word and punch. very powerful, and hoping that you are not living this anymore. thank you for sharing.
Annie

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