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Clutching the gate
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Clutching the gate |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I'll scratch my eyes shut on the force of your words. Delicate colors burst up like small flowers. I'd rather be blind than face your sharp blades cutting defenses down in the dirt. Quite a large garden and quite a large gate. I'll find my way out, fences to ladders, climbing the air and tasting the sun. What will it take to find my way back. Don't touch me just yet -- I can learn angles. Observing perspective, the image is blurred. But once I remember the matter is urgent I can go back to distant, slow circles. Three sides are walked through. Only one left. I know enough to find the gate out. Never again to wander your garden. I know enough. To find the gate out. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
good and creepy...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mikey? and within these three sides IS the way out climb . . . *smile* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-02-2003 12:08 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks brian. It's good to be home for a moment. Sue, much thanks. This was inspired by listening to Last Dance on repeat. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi Squirrel Guy! Nice to see you around these parts. This is intense and full images for me I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Temptress! Great to bump into you. How's it goin'? E-mail me. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Don't touch me just yet -- I can learn angles. Observing perspective, the image is blurred. But once I remember the matter is urgent I can go back to distant, slow circles awesome! |
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