Dark Poetry #4 |
here by mistake |
Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
We don’t seem to understand When she says, “It’s been a bad day.” Her hands are shaking now. She sits by herself, still, While everyone surrounds her It’s as if no one was there. Sometimes she can’t see her own reflection. We think it would be so easy, But she doesn’t agree, Sometimes, she gets close to tears “But with that perfect hair,” we won’t say out loud, “she’ll make it through.” She listens to sad songs all the time, And reads stories that make her cry, And as she watches people go missing on TV, Sometimes she wishes she could too. She wants to dance in the rain… With someone nice Who’d still be there in twenty years, And teach her how to let her hair down. She figures there’s no destiny for her, That she’s here by mistake And maybe one day, God will realize and take her away. Sometimes she wouldn’t mind being erased. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
She wants to dance in the rain… With someone nice Who’d still be there in twenty years, And teach her how to let her hair down. that bit made me cry. dude, i love you and your writing. i feel so much closer to you when i read your words. it connects me to you in a really sad way, but i feel what your writing. this was so amazing, i gotta save it. this, oh god, im still crying. love you. and GO NATIONAL can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
i completely agree with lor. your writing is so awe inspiring and beautiful. and it is a way to connect with you, in a sad, but also beautiful way. your writing opens you up. it exposes who you are. and it's a beautiful thing to see. I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
didnt save loved it can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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