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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-10-29 11:11 PM

Battle war ravaged hate
Borne this dirt poison free
Thin narrow selected few
Royalty of being white

Arrogant democratic fifty stars
Sharpened gold, pure silver, platinum price tag
Life after life, death to death generate
Millions, antfarm of the queen
Dirty work, labor field, paraphernalia
Overdose rotten decay 50, 60 coffin hold

Guilty punished and segregated
Seperated
Singled out

Free of disease
A "MAN" they say
little boy, must be stupid
quit stop dont
loser

Dictate free speech muted imprisonment
Shhhhh.... secret
Desire
Fat
Dead and trying

Let it burn.

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die. So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-10-31 03:54 PM

This is strong stuff, I'm still digesting, but the images you created were amazing. Especially the part about the ants.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

2 posted 2003-11-01 01:41 AM

Very nice/original/unique way of making a political statement, I loved it. Great write.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

3 posted 2003-11-01 01:00 PM

a lot to take in, but great

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-11-02 02:28 AM

Thank you everyone. Basically just saying let them have it, and take it, and whatever else they'll do.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die. So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-11-02 05:18 AM

Clapping. A poem after my own heart. Time we all stood up to be counted. Maggie

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-11-02 12:00 PM

Craig?

let it burn . . .
reminded me of T.S. Eliot
*smile*
xxoo

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

7 posted 2003-11-03 07:53 PM

I have said it before, and i will say it again...DaM your good boy! =)

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

8 posted 2003-11-04 12:53 PM

cusick-thanx. Im sure one day we will. I know i will. ;}

littlewing-Im not sure who T.S. Eloit is, but thanx anyway.

River-looking foreward to more conversations with you. Thanx.

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die. So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

9 posted 2003-11-04 07:12 PM

Craig, you have some wonderful imagery in here, jeep it up man, your only getting better

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

10 posted 2003-11-05 09:57 PM

Thanx eor. I'm working on it.

GIS

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die. So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-11-08 12:57 PM

gawd!

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