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hold me down |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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hold me down envelope your arms around me etch your brandings into my skin let the world know what you have and what they can't take away whisper sweet nothings let your words lick my shame hold me down in case i squeeze from your grip and find a way to slip loose prick my skin find your own way under target the pain hold me down i'll be fine once the burning is over let the sensation ride take its toll let me rest a bit but all the while hold me down can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow, almost a sexual quality in there. Loved it, glad to see you are writing again.  Very poetic. Made my day just that little bit brighter.Courts. Hollow. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
ha the second time i read it i too got the sexual influence.... but it wasn't intended lol can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I got a whole lot out of this. Love, passion, loneliness, I even saw an addictive aspect to it. LOTS of goodies in this one. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
mmm yes, very seductive vibe. and i can also feel the addiction. very poetic and thought provoking. I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
yeah wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fully agree with wat LW sed bout this one. love nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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