Untitled from 2001 "Sight"

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Dark Poetry #4

Untitled from 2001 "Sight"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-08-17 05:08 PM

Inside the gray room is where it begins
The music roars and smoke hides
Trumpet cries

Sounds roam, exhilerate
The pretty plastic is on a tour

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

1 posted 2005-08-25 06:18 PM

I have no idea what you're trying to do here.

It's only a tragedy after we bleed.
Your pain doesn't count 'til it's stained the sheets.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-08-26 09:48 PM

Maybe like a vision, with smoke. Sorta psychedelic.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-08-26 11:18 PM

yes, you know - I don't know if you have ever read any of Jim Morrison's poetry, you should Craig, amazing stuff, but THIS reminded me of "The Movie"

here go see - I like this a lot - leaves a lot to be imagined.
http://www.thedoors.com/band/jim/?fa=booktour04

check out the whole site.
(ok some of it is dirty, just in case)

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-08-28 02:05 AM

This is like the second or third time I've been told something I had written reminded someone else of something of Jim Morrison.

and thats real cute to give me the warning about the dirty material thing. I can handle dirty material, but I would rather not, because of the whole "garbage in, garbage out" thing. But yeah, thank you littlewing.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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