Dark Poetry #4 |
Sapped Free Love |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Only completing this as part of me I can see flowers and free love Judgemental freaks that won't leave me alone Denouncing who I am and what I'm about Grab your throat with doctrine Your stone eyes I can almost think Psycho, twisted, fearful Be armed with your paranoia Set me in a place where my stance is lower than you You can peer over to me, While looking down You're so much better than me, aren't you? God couldn't possibly move through me And spread his fire You would condemn it and declare heresy Light a match, cause I'll burn better But don't you DARE complain about the smell Pour your concrete in my lap And tell me I'm dead Or maybe I'll die soon Perhaps the Great Dragon will take me under his wing... But after you're gone And I'm somewhere in this shade Who's left for your empty spot? You laid the tracks and deserved your reward But your job isn't finished If a plant killed its seeds Exstinction would come in one generation Give me water, and let me live Guilt, trickling away Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
your best yet. this is my themesong! i find it grotesquely funny that people choose the route of judgement over and over. and it's not even a paved road, just a rocky, dirty little road where brakes don't work as you travel down and down... of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Mike, you're crazy. Thats exactly what its about. Right on my friend. God bless, peace. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and also, not only of judgement but of nature continuing on no matter what mankind destroys. Lots of cool subtext here, Craig. Even the title. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Ants are eatting me. Thank you little wing. I take it your in maybe new york time or eastern time. It says you responded at 2, something am. and its 1:16am. here. Kinda cool, or should I say rad? -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LOL, yes NY time and get some bug spray, man. *smile* |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This indeed belongs in a Dark poetry forum. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The ants are really bizarre, because they're in my room and I don't ever take food to my room. They were just hanging out, and bitting me, lol. I guess it is a bit dark Xeonox. -GIS |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
reminds me of when I was little, the ants. That IS bizarre but I have seen them all over the place here, too - not in the house, but in trees and everything. Very weird. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Maybe its like an ant comspiracy, and they're all just confused... ? -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maybe the ants know something we don't? LOL |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
LOL. Obviously. I don't even like to be in my room as much. God bless. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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