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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-08-06 08:10 AM

I'm not sure what I'm doing
Its all so clear
I can see things over my head

A bounce that isn't there
Its only her flesh
And why is this cigarrette still smoking?
Godly man falling

Delilah, but my hair grew long
Too my feet
And the power is Him
Pitiful man accomplishing so much
Shattered in a pot

Shaken and jerked around
Coughing blood with finness
Bullets fly

Nothing is fake
Open mind cunsumed by all
Loss of sight
Blurry vision

Its here for me
But where am I?

Is she 17 yet
Old enough to say
Her mouth spills for me

A plastic world
Tumble here
Lose my dogs
And fleas that itch

Was it wrong?
Show me pain
Blurry path don't lie to me

Rolling wet
Its feels so good
I like it
With an empty stomache
His untrustworthy fingers
Ohh it hurts

Landing here somewhere
I'll puke soon
Hopefully
Once I loose the conrrol of what isn't me

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2005-10-02 04:50 AM

great writing... I liked it.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-10-02 04:49 PM

Do you understand it? I think thats why I wrote it.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-10-03 04:40 PM

very touching, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-10-03 08:35 PM

Thank you angelheart. I bet an actual angel's heart is soft, fierce, gentle, obedient,... wow. Just imagine that kind of love.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-10-04 06:53 AM

had to comment on this one, Craig
because it seems to me like a struggle between the flesh and the mind, body and soul,
man and woman and you are caught within those decisions.

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

6 posted 2005-10-04 09:39 PM

nice write, looking foward for your next one

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2005-10-04 11:27 PM

littlewing- Yeah, my mom says its almost time to buckle down, but I can't do that here... I need to do something though...
Thank you.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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