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Dark Poetry #4

Searching for love

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-07-31 08:16 PM

To the dashing twilight,
That brightened his nightlight,
Now leaves a man,
Full of crater memories,

Each wakeful day,
He begs and prays,
That the life that he had,
Can be returned- someway,

Foolish as he may seem,
His plight is not hasty,
For he had a kiss of heaven,
Each heartbeat- racy,

He has seen no angels,
Or miracles in his life,
But he met the perfect woman,
His potential future wife,

This is where u notice a twist,
Where all this was budged,
A touch of devilish wish,
And his whole mind drugged,

Now, don’t you start thinking?
Giving your beliefs,
As if your two cents count,
It won’t relinquish his thirst,

Some call him names,
And others keep quiet,
Fools love he had inquired about,
And a life full of pain he acquired.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2005-10-02 04:49 AM

Poetry that tells a story, bump for you.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-10-03 09:06 PM

This does tells a story I noticed and things like this happen. Thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-10-04 06:59 AM

and this, I do believe we can all relate to.
Reminded me of how I felt after divorce, actually.
Well done.

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

4 posted 2005-10-04 09:42 PM

did this happen to you bro? it seems sad... thanks for sharring

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2005-10-04 10:27 PM

I wrote what happened in this poem.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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