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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
The floor is set in concrete, Our feet barely leave the ground Distant fading drumbeat Rotting guitar. Back of the crowd, Just as always, as always At the back of the crowd Taking a few steps forward Never moving. Lights above, Shining down, down To where we stand Slightly sway, slightly float away. It's getting higher, We are, we are just as always Familiar, just as scars Like always, us The back of the crowd. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I don't really relate unless I'm injured, but yeah, good poem. -GIS Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sometimes, with just the right amount of elbow work, you can make your way to the front, but sometimes, it's not all it's cracked up to be. concert as a metaphor for life, if that's the case i bought tickets for tool but ended up with at hoobastank..hoobastank fans can relax it's a joke. settle down both of you. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
ha awesome reply Aenimal! yeah dude i liked this one, nice and metaphorical teehee......... you know ill be at the front, and if you wnat i can grab ur hand and pull you through the crowd...... then we can scream together heart you so much peace nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
oooo awesome! gooood stuff bo! havent been here in a while, but i loved it. can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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