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A MEMORY
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A MEMORY |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Too many lies left unrepaired too many reasons to be scared too many scars that will never heal too many resons to forget to feel too many pieces scatterd everywhere The fight... i just dont want to care! the feeling of love doesnt appeal my heart needs more time to heal. the wounds cut deep the blood starts to seep. My sleeve becomes bloody my eyes are flooding with tears of insanity im full of vanity. I dont want to be like this over just one kiss nothing is worth the pain im sick of being vain. You left me full of rage you locked me in this cage this cage thats full of demons trying to give me reasons. They haunt my every waking hour turning everything so sour I try to tell you how i feel but you refuse to believe its real Love isnt supposed to feel like this I just wanna go back to that first kiss. ~karissa I ask why, but in my mind, I find i cant really rely on myself. ~~~Linkin Park~~~ [This message has been edited by kissa~rachelle (05-30-2005 10:08 PM).] |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
BRILLIANCE call it first kiss.. boring but cool i absolutely LOVED that ending! awesome chica! xox can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You could call it "A Memory." Yeah I can relate to this one on a few different occasions, but the follow up crap is ok. Basically when it gets to where its sorta haunting forget it or ignore it and go on. Cool poem. - GIS Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
flucking awesome girl... i know that feeling all too well.... excelent way to capture the feelings... keeep it coming chika Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
I really like this poem. It has great rhythym!! The words just flow... |
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