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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-05-21 11:57 PM

A black sky with thick clouds
You can't see it all
An ant crawling on a tree
In the company of three
Many more on the ground
All out of sight

On a trail to a certain destination
We love our way
On you we pray
Eat to our hearts content
The fattest will survive
Staying alive...

Friction, its a little tense
A ghost quietly in my presense
My feet slipping on the salt
To the flickering light
I'm slightly blind
I CAN'T SEE
WHAT ARE YOU?
how did you get there?
To whom do you COMPARE?

Watching little me...
tee hehehe (its a secret)
Come eat my face
My open soul
DEVOUR!
Eat it whole
Every last bite
Get off from here

Tell me the truth
The truth isn't in you
The molded clay
You CLAY POT!

Its gettin tense
The friction, the vibe, the love...
It EXPLODES
The lightening strikes
It hits the little ant
And the path doesn't even matter
Sudden death syndrome
Instantly dead
Gone and gone forever
Roasted singed
Dead...

Now you're quiet.

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me. -The Beattles

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-05-22 09:12 PM

I feel and see a lot of anger in this......a tuning of mind of sorts.....powerful! even between the lines...

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2005-05-23 07:32 AM

I Like this...Great Write...

"Trina"

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-05-23 11:40 PM

Yeah, I guess it is pretty angry. I'm not trying to be a jerk about anything though. I guess it just sorta came out that way.
thank you greeneyes.

Thank you innocent one, you're cool.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me. -The Beattles

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