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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2003-10-26 08:43 AM

I Hate the Person I’m Becoming
I’m Going Towards the Light
From Which Others Are Running
No Sleep at Night
I’m Tossing and Turning
Can’t Take the Pain Inside
My Hearts Been Broken, Now its Hurting
But the Pleasure I Get Makes it All Seem to Disappear
All One Big Regret, and Yet I’m Still Alone Here
I’m So Scared, I’m So Alone
My Hearts Turned to Stone
No One Understand Exactly How I Feel
For Love, My Soul Aches
But I’m Getting Tired, Letting Go
No Longer Fueling this Fire
Even If My Life it Takes
Tell Mom I Love Her, and Tell Dad Too
I Loved Them Both Very Much Even If They Never Knew
Tell Everyone to Smile and Not to Be Blue
I’m Happy Now and You Should Be Too
Theres No More Pain, and No More Tears
No Black Rain, No Lonely Fears
My Soul Is Free, Free at Last
So Smile for Me Remember the Pain Will Pass
But the Memories Will Never Fade
By Your Side and in Your Heart Forever I Remain

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-10-26 10:28 AM

Nice poem. Forever I Remain, but it sounds like the end of something.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

*Inque Monroe*
Junior Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 43
No where special

2 posted 2003-10-26 02:09 PM

That poem is amazing, I really enjoyed it alot, we all have felt that way at times. That really describes it.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-10-26 06:02 PM

I liked this, because it's saying you can have the memories without the pain. That's the way it should be!!! I love the resolve made, too! Very nice getting your feelings out here.

Love,
Terri~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2003-10-28 05:29 AM

Hey Thanx For All The Comments Nice To Know Peeps Opinion ~!~

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

5 posted 2003-11-02 05:32 PM

WoW!! I loved this!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-08 01:14 PM

pretty cool write

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

7 posted 2004-12-12 02:10 AM

ok, sorry, THIS is your best. WOW! that was so good, expecially the end. it almost made me cry. You are such an amazing writer, please never stop. dark and beautiful

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2004-12-12 04:56 PM

Woah! Amazing! ^_^

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

9 posted 2004-12-12 07:45 PM

Don't ever consider ending it,
through your writing you have found your answer.
Please keep writing from your beautiful soul?

CB 8)

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