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Dark Poetry #4

Loves Me... Loves Me Not

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2005-05-09 01:34 AM

Just one question I have for you.
Once you realize the depths of my feelings,
Seeing that I am becoming more than just fond of you,
How long will it take you to turn about-face and run?
Unless I miscounted the petals as I plucked them,
As always the answer is you already have.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2005-05-09 03:20 PM

This is awwwwwwwwwwesome.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Beenie
Junior Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 27
WVa

2 posted 2005-05-09 05:26 PM

I have counted those petals many times......thanks for putting it into words!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-05-09 11:57 PM

I don't think I have anything to worry about. Comfortably numb. Nice write.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me. -The Beattles

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2005-05-10 12:45 PM

I like the simplicity of it and the length of it. A small punch, with a huge impact.

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

5 posted 2005-05-10 04:01 PM

***big smiles***

this is very cool!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-05-10 07:01 PM

Alot said, in few words. You convey your thoughts well in this. well done.

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