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Why can't you see?
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Why can't you see? |
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Beenie Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27WVa |
Why can't you see? There is nothing in this world that I wouldn't do for you. I am so hopelessly in love With your touch, your kiss, you..... For I try and try to do whatever it is that you need. Why can't you see? You say those words of love so passionatley in my ear. Then turn around and hurt me. Your callousness, your cold, your selfrighteousness. Knowing full good and well what it does to my heart. Why can't you see? You say that I am oversensitive. You say that I'm permanently in a depressed state. You take my words of longing, and turn them into words of pain and darkness. This abuse that I suffer, is that of a hardened man. Why can't you see? I know what it is that I need to do. But, tell me... How am I supposed to live without you? How am I to survive without your touch? What am I to do with this love in my heart? How am I to go on, having to love you from afar? Just tell me.... Why? Why can't you see??? Beenie |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
I read this and thought...WOW this poem was written about me!! I totally understand it |
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Beenie Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27WVa |
It's nice to know that there is someone else out there that thinks like me. Hope to have more soon! |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Right here... i know how that feels. It's hard, it took me almost 2 years to know how to move on and give my feelings to someone else, but life does move on. and after about 6 months i was happier being alone and hurting then having someone else hurting me. things'll change when the time's right, have faith. Good piece, keep writing. " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Sometime we can't get what we want for the roadblocks in our own minds and hearts...sometime, all we can do is sit and watch it slip away.. Click |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you know, each time I read you - you whip me back to a time in my life when I was a very mean person and you know what? I regret everything I have done to hurt any person in my life and one day - the person you are loving will realize that - as you have moved on and they are left with themselves to deal with, which - is a truly scary thing. |
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