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"To Him"
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"To Him" |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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he's left her lying alone left to fend for herself, work through it all somehow she'd leak her salty sorrow if only he'd let her she picks herself up, convincing herself shes ready ready to move on with her life erase all memories of her rattled past and find her way to another place her mind made up from all the insane thoughts yesterday was a different story her heart iced over from being wronged too many times she doesn't care what happens in the end entangled in her own vines of insecurity she'd spit in the face of doubt she doesn't care, it's not her problem she'd rather sit back and watch someone else suffer staggering to find stability she reaches for the cleaning cupboard clinging to any form of elimination she collapses in a heap, ready "It's just another day" she mutters to herself, amused "He's gone, I'm here, what more could I do?" Sipping on her liquid death she laughs "If only he could see me now." her denial is stripped of all hesitation her lips moving in unison to her thoughts she breeds devastation only to leave all she ruins behind images of him flashing through her mind him touching her all over, every inch she can feel his flesh against hers it only makes it worse "A toast." she burps hazardous bubbles black entering the corners of her eyes bottle raised in acknowledgment "To him." she whispers as darkness engulfs her can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
if only you could see me now this is my fave of yours. this is brilliance. this is tender. this is destructful teehee. i love it staggering to find stability she reaches for the cleaning cupboard clinging to any form of elimination she collapses in a heap, ready "It's just another day" she mutters to herself, amused "He's gone, I'm here, what more could I do?" Sipping on her liquid death she laughs "If only he could see me now." its powerful that bit. reminds me of myself *nervous laughter* uhhhh ill catch ya tomorrro dude l&e nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
all, I can say is i know when i see a talent...and u got talent.. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
sounds like you're giving up. You don't have to. Pain is only a part of life. Actually only when the pain is finished do you realize just how mortal you really are. And it feels good to live through it and know you made it. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
this was really different to how i usually write, and i just wanted to see how it went down. not a personal experience... obviously. thank you for the comments can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
wow...if only i had the courage to post something like that to finaly get it off my chest. until then this will haunt me. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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