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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-04-18 08:37 AM

Will I ever kiss you once again?
Will I ever hold you ever so tightly?
I want you know one thing,
Love is crazy,
In it I have fallen,
With you as my savior,
I can’t swim alone,

I won’t stop thinking about you,
The way we hug,
And kiss beneath the maple tree,
How will I live without you?

I can’t stop thinking about you,
The beat to my heart that I hear today,
Will you ever tell someone?
You love them the same way,
As you whispered it in my ear,

I can’t stop thinking about the future,
Without you in it,
I will cry and cry,
Don’t want to think about those thoughts,
For I shake and loose control,

I am glad you are here,
And wanted to tell you that I miss you,
And the kisses you bring everyday,
Mean so much more today,
Then they did yesterday.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Beenie
Junior Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 27
WVa

1 posted 2005-04-19 06:21 PM

uh... wow! I really enjoyed this one. I have felt those feelings so many times before, and am feeling them once again with yet a new love. Thank you for your words...

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2005-04-20 05:36 AM

yeah reallly coool!!!!!!! loved it! the opening stanza was my favourite cus it was very powerful.

lovely write, really sad as well though

love and empathy

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-04-20 11:31 AM

I can’t stop thinking about the future,
Without you in it,
I will cry and cry,
Don’t want to think about those thoughts,
For I shake and loose control,

heartbreaking....

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2005-04-20 11:55 AM

I realize all this after the realtionship ended so u know..advice for others to appreciate what they have.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

5 posted 2005-04-24 07:36 AM

this is so beautiful xeonox i know these feelings all to well and am feeling them now wen im not with my partner....
well written and keep them coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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