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Dark Poetry #4

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EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2005-04-16 05:01 AM

RECOIL

Your chill breath
escapes
the emptiness of the chasm
of my long forgotten touch
while your body
long since cold
recoils

The withered remnants
of this heart
hang, defeated
oozing black
the scraps of a love,
long since dead

And still you sleep
soundly
in desolation of the knowledge
that this soul
that can love
no more
returns
to the darkness

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2005-08-02 11:13 PM

ouch...

Not the kind of thing I'd hoped to find when I tuned back in to my friends in the blue...

Great sifting though, written well

hugs! g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-08-31 06:38 PM

OhEddie~
Poignant penning ... you still rock, poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-08-31 07:46 PM

I know this feeling well . . . too well and am sorry you have to feel it too.

it is a most lonely place to be.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2005-09-09 09:22 PM

yes yes...I do know someone like this.

I enjoyed this one just tells it like it is.

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

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