Dark Poetry #4 |
trust |
darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
trust so hard so complicated so confusing so painful when you break it. when you hurt me. when you tear me to pieces then never bother to pick me up off the floor and put me together again. faith i lack that. alot of it is lies and promises that get broken. like friendships and trust i wish i had it - faith - in you. and my life and something bigger than that. hope all I have, i guess. hope that tomorrow is better. hope that you care wether I’m with you tomorrow or not. hope that you trust me and my decisions. forgiveness i give this out for no charge and I expect nothing in return. I loved watching you crawl to me. begging for it. you take advantage of me. and I would hope and pray you would realise how bad you hurt me. You never forgave me For the mistake I made And every day I regret it And hate myself More and more Because I miss you And I forgive you And I deserve something back nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Oh wow. Nothing has been quite like this for a while. I am so so happy to see your name on the list. Second stanza, was the very best. I can't wait to see you today so I can tell you how great you are and how awesome this is. Sad, but be-a-utiful. Hollow. Courtney. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow. I love it. Watch the pride scrape and cry off my face, dying to give the gratitude here deserved. Trust. Drop a bomb in your lap and wait because you know its friendly and even if it does blow you to bits, it will kindly put them all back together again. Awesome. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
I loved watching you crawl to me. begging for it. you take advantage of me. and I would hope and pray you would realise how bad you hurt me. god sophie you are too amzing for words. that was SO good, i can't even begin to explain. god you are BACK even if i may never be. if i could swear, there would be many many words. kcuf you woman. brilliance. can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Very well written....this hits home... |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
hey! wow it feels so weird to be writting reviews again lol. Do i really need to say anything? So powerful, it leaves and imprint! great! bex "I have a hard time keeping from drowning in this crazy buisness" - River Phoenix 1970-1993 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I really enjoyed the following paragraph. You never forgave me For the mistake I made And every day I regret it And hate myself More and more Because I miss you And I forgive you And I deserve something back I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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