Dark Poetry #4 |
Startling Jive |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The giggles that laugh Rolling topple path Destiny, desire, duties hath One with... Do the math John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
very interesting, i dont grasp the meaning but i dont grasp the ocean either, but i know its very deep and so is this poem New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
LOL... Dude, this was a phenom. So much with so few words... and very creative. Liked, mucho. I take it your journey you are currently on is showing you the grandest of great times. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you Jackal. Deep oceans are the hardest to predict, and leave plenty of room for submerging. Kinda chaotic actually. Ah, the journey was nothing, although I did manage to pass three chapters. At the moment I'm more concerned with my path rather than journey. Thank you. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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