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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-03-16 11:26 PM

Fly your kite
If it makes you smile
When a storm rolls in,
And takes a piece of you
With it’s bite.

(Your death was such a waterfall)

Slip on icy shores…
All you ever bled,
Comes flooding back
Stumble on a cliff,
With sweating hands.

(Your death was such a waterfall)

Peel away your fear
I tried to stop
You jumping
I tried to stop
You overflowing

(Your death was such a waterfall)

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2005-03-17 12:05 PM

I loved everything about this. It had a certain tone that I liked. Excellent job.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2005-03-17 06:48 AM

Wow...

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

3 posted 2005-03-17 10:50 PM

OMG! i loved this. so amazing! that rocked. your writing is so great to read.

by any chance about a certain type of water? tee hee

laura

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2005-03-18 12:39 PM

ahhh love it as much now as i did when u first showed me it in science........

i wanna be a waterfall

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-03-18 09:24 PM

I adore this:

Your death was such a waterfall

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

6 posted 2005-03-26 01:18 AM

"Fly your kite... if it makes you smile"

YOU RULE!!!!!!!!!

This was awesome in every respect. And like littlewing, I love the multi-use of "Your death was such a waterfall".

Dang, you've gotten dang good!!!!!! (Sorry, southerner in me) LOL

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

7 posted 2005-03-27 04:32 AM

awesome, truly awesome.

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

8 posted 2005-03-27 03:59 PM

utterly spellboundingly amazing.

I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

9 posted 2005-03-28 04:55 AM

WinterWren - Thanks. I'm pretty pleased about this one.

S_I - Lol. Thank You. The response I aimed for.

Lor - Dude, thanks as always. Hmmm....it just could be....

Soph - You are. You flow.

lw - Thank you so much!

Purity - DANG! You rule too!

M_H - Thank you for making me smile.

Kurst - *squee* You make me feel so good. Thanks.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

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