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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Small device In mid air Dangling With my father in control The pilot The electricity to leave the runway hot and fire steel manuver components jetstream fierce opening sound, engaged buildings trees and an empty stomache hard pull stretch invisible I'm going somewhere and I'm gone To a place... ...peace pieces I'm gonna eat a fuzzy peach and some thick red apples Before I explode and set a fire a love for you, flight over you fire, I'm a fire hazard A little steam scorching skin sunburnt, you must come to. Remember this inside of that Listen for her rounds and bounce Small smoke Truly all, and you, ...scream firey angel John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Cool Write, I Like... "Trina" Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, you have an entirely new voice, I adore it. This sounds so BEAT to me . . . like Kerouac or Saul Wiliams . . . |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you Trina. And thank you littlewing. I have to agree about the voice changing thing. I should probably go check out those two you mentioned. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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