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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-10-24 08:51 AM

You caressed my entry
while I began to lapse.
This profound and new,
course.
As I touched –
My beginning.
You cradled me,
with obvious lace,
and I asked -
are we the winners?
The ones who call out
For more.
We, the possessors of pain,
saving the future with
daily hope.
We - who are known as strength,
from that light, which consumes us.
That eternal fragrance, which feeds us
And Yes, I will bring with me,
Duration.
For I know - when
I taste time, with
my first breath.
Faith will be this memory of ours.
As I begin, my life forward.
Until our future meeting,
my entry - from the past.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-10-24 04:08 PM

Nice. Has a warm feeling of poverty to it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-10-24 04:30 PM

Thanks GIS, good to here from you.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

3 posted 2003-10-25 01:13 PM

Very nice

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-10-26 08:10 AM

Thanks for reading Mad_Hatter.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-10-27 12:36 PM

nice rebirth Poe
this is one of your finest
*smile*
xxoo

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

6 posted 2003-10-27 01:39 PM

poe-my man, fing fantastic, i loved every word, each line could be tthe start of another poem it self, wow, addinf this and printing this, this is going in my 'personal' archives at home, if you dont mind.

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-10-27 02:14 PM

lw, Thanks for stopping by--again. I really enjoy your ( spiritual visits ). Thanks again for the kind words ( don't go ).lol.

poe

eor, I'd be honored my man. Have you been on a sabbatical? just kidding, haven't seen your writing around. Good to here from you. Later.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (10-27-2003 02:15 PM).]

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