Dark Poetry #4 |
Why am i afraid of the dark? |
NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
Am i afraid of the dark because your not with me? Am i afraid of the dark because i am alone? I am not afraid of the light in the night But when the candles dim And the light seems ever so thin Why then am i afraid of the dark? The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
its a bit repeatitive. but... The point gets across. perhaps elaborate. |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
I dont actually like this poem, a friend posted it without me knowing. It really needs some work, its not even complete. NightFall The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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