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Dark Poetry #4

Noone

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-02-13 06:12 PM

there was no pain in his eyes
as he left me.
no sorrow in his voice
as he went his way
despite our past
despite our love.
he regretted that he needed me
that he loved me so
and no amount of his love returned
could heal his pride now gone
he was everything to me,
and i even more to him
but his ego was an evil foe
so he left without a tear
i told myself to be strong
that it was for the best,
but even now i know the truth
that now, without him,
i am noone.

tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

1 posted 2005-02-15 09:19 AM

Poems of loss are generally something of a burden to read.....thank you for showing me the exception. One can only hope this is a wonderful creation of the mind, and not a piece of your broken heart.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2005-03-09 04:39 AM

but his ego was an evil foe

Yes, It Is....Great Write.

"Trina"

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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