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Dark Poetry #4

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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-02-12 06:45 PM

Hey, hey,
Tears just amplify the way,
We bleed our way to heaven.
Hey,
Do you want to exhibit your scars?
See the comfort die on their pretty faces…
Ha, isn’t it funny?

Strip-tease your sleeves
Freeze frame their emotion.
The glass shatters in your grip,
Red wine pours from the cracks,
They bring you down,
And hold you down,
And down.

And the legacy runs from needles to guns
And no one's immune to the pain
From Marilyn to River Phoenix
From Elvis to Kurt Cobain

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2005-02-12 10:53 PM

Living within parameters and overstepping shortcuts. Sometimes very hard and defeating, but seems to work out. Cool poem.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2005-02-13 02:52 AM

geez!!! dude that was awesome, fulllllyyyy relatable. i loved the bitter sarcasm you used and the imagery was perfect!!!!!!!!!

awesome as usual, you never fail to lower your standards (ha sounding like mr griffiths)

cya tomorro, its the dreaded valentines day. might strike a poem.

l&e always

soph

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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