Dark Poetry #4 |
Wisp of Life |
~*DrAgOnFLY*~ Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 29Haven of Abyss |
Fading away And disappearing I’m not hearing What you have to say I won’t be here tomorrow I feel so far away It’s slowly slipping from me There’s little more to say No one cares to save me No ones really there It’s all a dream Please don’t be scared I’ll always be with you No matter where my spirit flies I’m in your heart I’m in your soul All and all I will not die "You laugh because I'm different, I laugh because you're all the same" |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
Love your title! Sometimes life does seem like a wisp caught in the wind. "No matter where my spirit flies I’m in your heart I’m in your soul All and all I will not die" Wonderful sentiment and wonderful lines! Asia |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Cay, Thats awesome ^^ the last lines are really great, keep it up. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
=) luv u sis =) Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate well...long story, but yeah, I understand this one deeply |
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redrobin21865 Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12Florida, USA |
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work |
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