Dark Poetry #4 |
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Depression |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
It's waking up, and not knowing why you get up in the morning. When you never really get up at all. When you're afraid to go walking, afraid that somewhere along the way you'll find yourself face-down in the local inlet. Drowned in sixteen inches. All because you were enjoying the scenery. When you've got that coppery taste in your mouth, and no amount of flouride or formaldehyde can wash it away. When your smile is when people know something is wrong, and when you no longer notice the tears streaming down your face. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I like this. well self explained, completely understandable, good images, great job! - River (adds) "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful, so simple and yet as complex as depression itself.... depression is also when you no longer care if you live or die...... keep the writing coming Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Sad, yet Beautiful. "Trina" Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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