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Out of Anger
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Out of Anger |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The first thing about this piece is that it is offensive. People that read me pretty often might have a hard time believing that, but its true. It isn't directed at anyone, and maybe that is the reason it was written in the first place because I keep alot of what I should call anger bottled up so I can return good for bad, nonetheless I'm not sure how I've felt since I've written this except I had a premonition not to post it. And I'm not going to draw a line so instead of skipping through this little part it looks instead like part of the poem. So you read it therefore hopefully as made acceptable by the standards of the moderators. It begins now Here I am in a half baked life I can almost see the vultures of Hell The one controlling you that hates me. While I still hold it in, Quietly Your mouth runs faster than a freight train Going inside out around in circles all in your mouth And I'm pinned between the disire to make you shut it and God What should I do There's people worshipping STARTREK and LORD of the RINGS who swear its true but it wasn't discovered Until the authors wrote it only a few short years ago. Like a happy face on a rock saying this must be God But I'm not calling you stupid or anything like that. I just pointed out something New Aged And if you're feeling stupid maybe you are, but I didn't say that If you didn't catch it Like a desire to be God You wanted it so bad that its built in and you can't stop Even if you wanted to Hating every moment, but its who you are, its what you do. The black sheep that turned white Too blemished for the pure And too white for the black And I can't stop Its what I do Its who I am Running on a bike and working out Writing poetry and playing guitar I feel like a misfit Always like I just missed it in a sound denial Thinking in pictures, seeing visions But I keep trusting God Even when I'm cracked in the back of the head And you bowing to something you could have made yourself Say I'm weak You never answered me when I asked If you were too good And you never will You know why? Because it hurts to know you're a stuck up, self-centered, Mangy, corn-toothed, bush cocked, ignorant, freaking prick. Take a look in the mirror You'll see each and everyword will match up true. And it will be offensive, because its true and you Have your faith forward in a lie Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I know the type of person you speak of. All too well. Lord of the Rings and Star Trek. heh heh |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The kind of person would do good to do some investigative thinking. Mankind has made it to the moon a few times and there has never been some kind of starship command leave earth such as the one in Star Trek. And in Lord of the Rings if that were true why would the talking and walking trees not do it now. And it would probably be reasonable to suggest the hordes would be more highly developed from swords and spears to bombs and guns. Does the name Spider Hawk sound familiar to you? -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*laughs* I probably shouldn't laugh at this. But my first reaction was just that. I swear you were venting towards some of the people that I have been unfortunate enough to meet in this life. Very well put. BWA |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
BWA- Yeah, now that I have reread it I have to agree. Some parts do make me laugh, and smile. Thanks for pointing that out. hehe -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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