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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
"Head full of clay" feeling, your feet are so light it hurts to move, you can't stand the weight dragging you down. You stumble and fall on painted lines, wishing the sky would stop spinning for you. looking for some kind of focus, something solid. Reaching out and you meet ephemereal images, behind your eyelids, and somehow more real than anything you've seen before. *just trying to work out the writer's block.* |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Sounds like your coming out of it quite nicely... for I enjoyed this... especially this line: You stumble and fall on painted lines |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The truth is offensive to a lie. *about the Constructive Critiques thing. Yeah it does sound like you're coming out of your block. When I write I don't try to do anything great. I just think about a given situation and describe it and how it feels. Like describing a certain aura. Like a painting or music. If that helps... -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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