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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Something The light shines through the darkness that admists The demons flee as it penetrates harder than fists, Time runs fast as the hell-fire begins, Wrapping around me as an enclosed cage - ravaging within. Everytime something is said, Want to turn myself inside out to show what I bled, I wish there was a fountain for all the tears I shed, Maybe a dollar for everytime I wanna be dead. To save everyone from what I've become, Help the people that haven't changed into something undone, Bleed-cry-die, Its all the same one- life. If life was only a proven perdicament of a test to sanity, Id be standing right up here saying how proud I am to be, But it's nothing like that - exactly, It's time to hide beneath the mess and rest so no one else will save me. |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
Neat write! I love these lines: "Everytime something is said, Want to turn myself inside out to show what I bled" Asia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool...I understand this well |
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PeaceInEverything Junior Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 31Ohio, United States |
I liked your poem. I really liked this line : It's time to hide beneath the mess and rest so no one else will save me. I feel the emotion from this poem and thank you for it. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I think someone will always save you if you know where to look. Loved the poem. Maggie |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
I really like this poem I really like the lines: "Time runs fast as the hell-fire begins, Wrapping around me as an enclosed cage - ravaging within" Great work. |
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