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Dark Poetry #4

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-01-08 01:35 AM

I can see him
He's glamour and hard
Silky tight
Perfectly smooth

He's daddies biggest nightmare
With little devils of secret games
Sparkling black overlain with flesh
Just touch...

Is it bad?
Anything wrong?
Does it ever hurt?
Or so so soft and warm?

Can I be him?
Could I want to be like him
Running and dancing with pink furry bunnies
And the ground falls out

You stand on nothing
But I didn't fall
Your screams get farther and softer
Were you ever standing, or just a floater

Her tastey slivering lips swallowed you
Moist hot huffing breath
Sweetly moaning your name
Beckoning to come closer

Lost in this world from comprehension
Not knowing yourself
Just those around you
Trapped in this flirtatious butterfly hell
Does it still feel good?

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

[This message has been edited by green_itchy_stuff (01-08-2005 10:31 AM).]

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2005-01-08 02:13 AM

"Does it still feel good?"...
It doesn't at the moment, but at least the bitter taste can be left from either gender, eh?
Good write, and like you, I am probably too much self-compelled in a far-off frame of mind to give proper credit to this poem. I'll take a rain check and properly kudo you soon.
Love ya, Craig.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-01-08 10:30 AM

I understand. Thanks anyway.
putz... lol.

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2005-01-09 11:49 PM

Interesting poem. I like the transitions you make in some stanzas.

Any idiot can see that the result is true.
-- argumentum ad idiotum
Me!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-01-10 01:08 AM

Thank you fractal.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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