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Girls and Hard Strings
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Girls and Hard Strings |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
She's fast and slap Almost nude And slams the sign Over your brain You look up and understand It has nothing to do with you A glance at her and You can see who she is Her personality climbs out at you Slap If only it were night Freezing Alone outside A touch of actual emotion A feeling of caring Who you are And its almost dead But you still know Just leave I see your regret That desperate struggle in your head And you just get confused And keep doing it Until you can't Then you loose Something here could be so beautiful The ancient beauty you've possesed from birth HIDDEN Oppressed and now invisible And you loose And die You lost To become a loser But you don't have to Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
"Something here could be so beautiful The ancient beauty you've possesed from birth HIDDEN" SLAP!! Actually, clapping here, not slapping. TOUCHE' Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
my God is awesome and you are number 2. "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Inspiring, Craig! If I might persouse a bit over faves... "A touch of actual emotion" "That desperate struggle in your head" "That ancient beauty you've possessed from birth" "Oppressed and now invisible"... "It has nothing to do with you" A poem within. I liked this one quite much! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you River. You're an awesome friend. It very well could be another poem or two News. Thanks -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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